Thomas.. I appreciate the feedback re: marketing. I was hoping on feedback re: the business model (the idea and concept).
These are some of the first vids I've ever made and I do recognize the need to trim things down.... way down. If you knew me.. you'd understand how difficult a task that is. :-) But, I'm always working to overcome my weak spots. Thanks for the feedback.
Thomas Carpenter said:
8 minutes is way too long. I made it 30 seconds. How about bullet points