I consider myself a senior level IT recruiter but everyone has their weaknesses. I think if I had to pick one, it would be my initial email that I send to potential candidates. Can anyone share with me some initial email ideas that I could use to really grab someone's attention and interest? I'm always afraid to send too long of an email because I feel that might turn a candidate away from me. In your experience, have you found that to be true? - Holli

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Here are some tips from Monster on writing effective emails:
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Wow! Thanks Libby! That is great information! Sould I include the entire job specifications (like a job posting on monster) as well in the initial email or just my company information (including some job teasers) and wait for them to respond until I send the rest of the more detailed information? Do you think it would turn someone off to get a long email with all the information right up front or do you think that is actually preferred by people?
I think they would like to get the basic information on the position and how that job and your company would be a good choice for them. Too many times recruiters push so much information about their company that they forget what the candidate actually wants to know "What's in this for me?" "Why is this a good choice for me?" Shift your focus on the candidate and tailor your emails toward them. You could include a brief description of your company or just add a link so that they can browse your website. Also be sure and include your own personal links such as Linkedin, Facebook, etc so they can find info on who you are. People buy from people they feel connected to.
Wow Holli, what a great question and Libby, thanks for the fantastic response.. I have been thinking of adding a "templates" and "best practices" library to my LinkedIn Recruiting Professionals Network.. This is just the type of knowledge and sharing I love to see happening.

Kind Regards,
Dawn
Look at it from a candidates prospective. What would grab your attention? I would keep your first contact email brief. Bait them to contact you for more information. The hardest part is trying to keep it professional, but informal enough to feel personal.

Good Luck!
Can you send me an example of what you write?
Bob,

I found your resume on --- or I noticed on your profile on --- that you have bee a ASP programmer for the past 5 years. I have a client that may be a great fit for you. They are a large organization based in your home town and are requiring 4-6 years exp. Please call me so I can give you the details.
This is what I have been trying out...do you think it is too much? I just wanted to give them some info about our company and the benefits we offer, so that they know what is in it for them...Of coarse the formatting looks a lot better than what it looks like here and I'm going to start incorporating some of the things you have noted in your example.

Example:

Subject Line: Ready to accept a great new challenge?

Terry,
Would you be interested in hearing the details of a Telecom Technician position that we have available in the Charlotte, NC area? If not, do you know of someone else that might be interested? Please let me know. Thanks. - Holli

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Holli,

I would suggest that what you are using is probably providing too much information for a first email. You are giving the recipient too many chances to say no. You want to get their attention and entice them to follow up with you, either via phone or email. You want to find out what their motivators are before you start providing too many details.

I would also phrase it in a way that suggests that you are interested in networking with them, wanted to share some details about a great opportunity with them. Best case response is that they are interested. Worst case is no reponse. Most likely case is that they will be willing to listen further and could end up as a future prospect or a provder of referrals.
Thanks for the replies to this post. I really appreciate it.
Holli,

The Initial Job Announcement said: "Men wanted for hazardous journey. Small wages. Bitter cold. Long months of complete darkness. Constant danger. Safe return doubtful. Honour and recognition in case of success."

Not much of an Initial Job Announcement is it? Nevertheless, when this ad was run by the polar explorer, Ernest Shackelton, men started walking across England to get to him. More than 5,000 applied. My point! Always remember to "Sell the Challenge."

All the Best!

Ray
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Holly,

I'd probably say to sell a bit less and really leave some bites for further intrigue. I think the best pitch is one that gives some really good key info, but leaves the reader interested in more. (Read any Airline Email Ad - those initial prices look awesome until you find out you have to leave at 3am Tuesday). I think you also want to incorporate a networking component to this, so that if it's not the right fit for the person, then perhaps they feel at least its a good role to pass on to trusted friends and colleagues. I really try to make it an email that seems like a face to face conversation so that it doesn't appear as a solicitation (though I guess it is, no matter what)

I'm happy to send you a copy of one I use for Linked In and for other places I network with people, just email me at pradloff@comscore.com

Good luck!
Pete

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